Dear Professor:
I understand that XXX is applying for admission to your Postgraduate Master’s Program, and has requested that I write this letter of recommendation for her.
I have known XXX as a resourceful and goal-oriented individual ever since she attended my Instrumental Analysis course(score:84) in her fourth academic semester. She often raised thought-provoking questions during the course lectures. Thus,it is natural that I like discussing with this young girl and enjoy becoming more familiar with her and her aspirations. In her sixth academic semester, she took my course of Electrochemical Analysis(score:89) more I get to know her, the more I find she is talented at chemistry. With her outstanding talent and solid background in chemistry, she also did quite well in most of her other courses during her undergraduate study. I feel strongly that XXX’s unusual talents and abilities will stand her in good stead for a quality chemistry education, and your university will provide the best opportunities for her.
While at XXX University, XXX had excellent performances in all subjects of her studies and demonstrated great potential, but she is more than a knowledgable bookworm；she is an outstanding leader. She is not only the President of the Student Union in the College of Chemistry, but also the Minister of Commo nweal Department of Students‘’Association Union of XXX University. She is adept in speech and debate, which give her great capabilities for expression, abstract reasoning， and cooperation. She also took part in and organised many extracurricular activities, such as “Dream Fly” Party of College of Chemistry and Chemical Knowledge Contest of XXX University.
We at XXX University see an optimistic, highly independent， and easy-going character in XXX, with highly unusual determination. She is not to be defeated by any difficulties. She believes that , with hard work, she can achieve anything she wants. I think her confidence in herself is well grounded in her track record.
Judging by what I know of her, I think XXX is fully qualified to pursue a Master’s degree in your program. Therefore，I recommend her with much enthusiasm and I shall greatly appreciate your favorably consideration for her application for admission.
Sincerely.
亲爱的教授:
我明白,XXX是申请进入你的研究生硕士项目,并要求我写这封信给她的建议。
我已经知道XXX作为一个机智和面向目标的个人自从她参加了我的仪器分析课程(得分:84)在她的第四个学术学期。她经常提出发人深省的问题在课程讲座。因此,很自然的是我喜欢讨论这个年轻女孩和享受越来越熟悉她和她的愿望。在她的第六个学术学期,她把我的课程的电化学分析(得分:89)。我要认识她,我觉得她是天才在化学。与她的优秀人才和扎实的化学,她也做得很好她的大部分其他课程的本科学习期间。我强烈感觉到XXX的不寻常的天赋和能力将忍受她很有用的一个质量化学教育,和你的大学将为她提供最好的机会。
在XXX大学,XXX有优秀的表演在所有科目的学习和表现了极大的潜力,但是她不仅仅是一个知识渊博的书呆子;她是一位杰出的领袖。她不仅是总统的学生会在大学化学,但也部长的公益部门的学生协会联盟的XXX大学。她擅长演讲和辩论,这给她伟大的能力、表达抽象推理和合作。她还参加了许多课外活动和组织,如“梦飞的党”大学化学和化学知识竞赛的XXX大学。
我们在XXX大学看到一个乐观的、高度独立的,随和的性格在XXX,极不寻常的决心。她是不会被任何困难。她相信,只要努力工作,她可以实现任何她想要的。我认为她的自信心精通她的记录。
从我所知道的她,我认为XXX是完全限定的去攻读硕士学位在你的程序。因此,我建议她与多热情和我均非常感谢你顺利地考虑她的入学申请。
真诚。
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美国留学推荐信模板篇二：出国留学_推荐信范文模板
推荐信（RL）是美国留学申请必不可少的一个环节，也是很多同学非常头痛的问题。推荐信到底有多重要？该如何索取以及撰写推荐信？本文将从策略的角度对这些问题进行深度解析，谈谈“推销制”，“全周期申请”等关键理念，而并非关注具体细节。
首先，推荐信到底有多重要？该花多少精力准备推荐信？先看看笔者从美国高校教授和学生口中获得的信息：
“这个人如果不去美国，将是浪费他的生命。’我就这样被强推到了Princeton数学系PhD项目。”
“西北大学交换时的一封牛推对我的申请起到了关键作用。”（哥大IEOR PhD，GRE仅1200分）
“最重要的指标就是推荐信，其次是标准考试成绩。最好准备四封推荐信，两封来自本科。”（纽约大学Stern商学院运营管理招生老师）
由此，推荐信的作用可见一般。何故？美国的社会的教育体制中推荐制度根深蒂固，推荐者往往用自己的声誉力保被推荐人，这就是所谓的Networking。面对堆积如山的申请材料，各具特色的申请者，专业录取委员会（Committee）没有办法在短时间内完全衡量一个人的水平，尤其是不敢只凭一封简历轻易相信大洋彼岸的申请者就是他们要找的人选。这时，一封有力度的推荐信往往可以起到事半功倍的效果。
这里要介绍一个申请中的“推销制”的概念。很多人总爱问“到底GPA重要还是GRE重要”，“PS和推荐信到底重不重要”的问题。答案莫衷一是。但是我们可以换个角度来考虑。比如你要卖一瓶矿泉水，那么申请截止日期，就是保质期，营养成分就是GPA，PS就是产品介绍，GRE和TOEFL质量机构的鉴定结果。显而易见，过期的产品肯定卖不出去，营养成分嘛，跟别人差不多就行，质量鉴定嘛，合格就行，而真正重要的首先是里面装的要是矿泉水而不是橙汁，这就是你到底是什么材料，其次就是消费者的朋友对你的评价，这就是从第三方角度写出的推荐信。由此可见，我们需要将传统的五点制（GPA，GRE，TOEFL，PS，RL）申请观念，转变成为推销制，即在满足基本条件的前提下，最大可能的推销自己。 所以，我无法回答推荐信到底中不重要的问题，一瓶水卖出去就是好水，但是第三方的强力推荐势必事半功倍，但是也有可能你都被录取了，推荐信还没有被committee打开（夸张点）。
那么，到底怎么索取推荐信呢？这里要宣传一种“全周期”申请理念，所谓强扭的瓜不甜。你要死要活，托关系死缠烂打乞讨来的推荐信往往没有什么效力。记住，当你决定申请的那一刻开始，申请就已经开始了，而绝不是等到提交申请材料的.那几个月。
笔者想以自己的切身经历来阐述这个问题。在决定申请后，找哪些人写，从哪些角度写推荐信，心里一定要数，必要时还可以几个候补名单:-)。比如，笔者借参加竞赛的机会向教授咨询意见，然后是长达半年的沟通和不断汇报自己的
进步，终于获得了参加其研究的机会，于是，一封推荐信水到渠成。另外，笔者选修某教授的课程，坚持每个office hour时间都去讨论一些问题。（注意，一点小的经验是这些问题要可持续讨论，比如做点改进后下周再去）结果顺利拿到暑期项目机会，另一封推荐信搞定。如此，笔者没有开口索要，反而教授们在得知我要申请时都主动提出为我撰写推荐信。因此，推荐信的索取是一个长期的，动态的过程，要考验一个人的机智、策略和耐心。推荐信的索取往往是困难的，在无数次想放弃的时候，都需要坚定的信念来支撑。殊不知，推荐信的价值恰恰在于它的难度，不是每个人都能弄到有价值的推荐信。如果老师不了解你，或者除了上课以外并无其它关联，一封推荐信上只有某某学习努力，经常提问，在我的课上考的前三名这样的话是没有多大力度的。俗话说，“攻心为上”，如果老师真的愿意帮你，写出来的推荐信还是不一样的。
索取推荐信后的撰写工作也十分讲究，即便跟老师不太熟悉，在这一步中也要设法补救。
第一：一封推荐信的推荐力度分三等：普通推荐，比较推荐，和强烈推荐。这一点，committee在阅读时都是能够心领神会的。一封强烈推荐的RL一定要有充分的实例对观点做支撑，如参与了什么研究，做了哪些工作，展现了什么能力，一定要具体。比如，强调某人的科研能力时，写出论文或报告的题目，主要技术路线和结论，以及被推荐信做的具体事项，如文献调研，编程，数学建模，实地调研等，并加之自己的主观评价，一定会给人耳目一新的感觉。第二：甚至可以维护性的指出被推荐者的缺点。维护自己不足的方法是承认它而不是一味掩饰它。比如，某次考试成绩不好或者其它方面有缺陷的，又不得不做解释的，推荐信是一个可以用来说明的地方，因为它出自第三方之口，显得更加公正。但最后一定要补充说明被推荐人虽然这次做的不好，但是不影响其它方面，并且有足够的潜力获得提高。
以上是我对推荐信的索取和撰写的一点个人心得，希望对大家有所帮助。申请的工作是一项系统工程，不要过问某项是否有价值，有多少价值，尽心走好每一步就是了，因为你永远不可能提前知道到底什么会提到关键性的作用。保持一种良好的心态才是制胜的关键。
Recommendation Letter
May 4, 2009 Dear Sir or Madam,
During studies at university, he is enthusiastic for every specialized course. With a diligent and surefooted attitude and striving for excellence,
he has completed each specialized course excellently, and in particular, he has learnt a lot about English culture and history. With strong abilities in writing, reading and communicating, he pays great attention to the improvement of his comprehensive qualities and energetically takes part in social practices. He is friendly to classmates and always ready to help others. I am quite satisfied with him.
Judging from these qualities, I believe that the young boy will make brilliant records in future studies. I fully support his application, and I will appreciate if you take him application into serious consideration.
As an associate professor of English Department of Foreign Language institute, Jilin University. I am writing the recommendation letter with great sincerity to furnish you with my knowledge of my student You name, who was born on October 8, 1988 in support of his admission to your honorable program. Should this letter be of any assistance of your processing of his application, I will be much delighted. I have known You name for almost two years and his capability and self-confidence left me a deep impression. In professional study, he was savvy and could master what he was exposed to quickly. In class, with agile thinking, he positively devoted himself to the study.
美国留学推荐信模板篇三：美国留学申请：RL推荐信范文
From Thomas Zhang
Department of Finance
Business School，YYY University
XXX, 430072, XXX
P. R. China
Dear Sir/Madam,
In the capacity of the former chairman of the Department of Finance and the associate dean of Business School in YYY University (P. R. China), I am writing with pleasure to recommend Ms. Sophie XXX to your esteemed graduate school.
Ms. XXX is a distinguished student in the department. I know her well through different occasions, besides teaching her a Financial Engineering course last year. I got to know her personally 2 years ago, when she was a candidate for exchange-student program of YYY University. Concerning her unspectacular academic results and her outstanding performance, she was awarded our university’s scholarship and a chance to study abroad in ZZZ University, which only one student from our department can receive every year. Her semester-long experience there turned out to be an impressive success. Ms. XXX showed great aptitude on all the courses she took and her GPA of that semester was 3.80. If you take the difficulty of the courses and strict grading into account, you will understand why her scores are among the top five. Undoubtedly, she got excellent scores on other core courses and ranked among the top 5% of her class when she got her bachelor’s degree.
Having been Ms. XXX’s director while she was completing her undergraduate thesis defense in 2008, I was greatly impressed with her skillful diagrams, and with the unified and coherent manner in which she articulated her thesis. She chose a daring topic – stock index futures arbitrage. In China, this is a very hot event. Although there are several models around the world, not one yet has been found suitable for China. She proposed a very feasible one in her thesis paper. Moreover, she also demonstrated a high level of proficiency in using statistic software in her research. Not only was the committee struck by the display of creativity at her thesis defense conference, her lucid presentation expressed clear and logic thought. Her expansive and open-minded academic perspectives really struck a chord, so it gives me a great deal of pleasure to give you my recommendation to this outstanding young lady of immense promise.
After she graduated from YYY University, she still keeps in touch with me. I feel very delighted when she told me she would like to pursue her advanced studies in your honored program. I trust her academic excellence, spirit of devotion and pleasant personality warrant your serious consideration of her application. Should there be any way in which I can be of further assistance in your deliberations, please do not hesitate to contact me directly.
Sincerely yours,
Associate Dean of Business School
YYY University
美国留学文书写作指导：英文推荐信范例与中文分析
Dear Sir:
It is my pleasure to recommend Mr. Fu-ping Wang for his application to graduate studies in your school.
Mr. Wang has been my research assistant of the National Science Council's project "The United States and the United Nations' Financial Crisis: The Role of U.S. Congress" since September 1997. His major responsibilities include information collecting, analyzing and translating. He is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with extremely high potentiality. Mr. Wang is not only quick at learning and good at solving difficult problems, but also with a logical mind that enables him to effectively analyze difficulties. All the work handed to him was completed satisfactorily. Actually, he is so reliable that I assign him with heavy responsibilities. With his help, I have been able to spend more time in writing the research paper. I really consider myself very fortunate to have such a capable assistant.
I am certain his diligence, coupled with a good competence and pleasant personality, will assure him of academic achievements in his future academic pursuits. I strongly recommend his admission without any reservation.
Sincerely yours,
Chung Wei-kuo
Research Fellow and Professor
The Institute of European and American Studies
Academia Sinica
Dr. S推荐信分析：
您觉得这封推荐信怎样呢?Dr. S认为，如果这是一封为秘书介绍新工作的推荐信，那还可以接受;不过对於对於申请研究所来讲，就似乎不太够力了。首先，这封推荐信犯的一个大忌就是不够明确。
从信中我们只看到推荐人很努力地用了一大堆形容词，试著告诉入学评审委员，这个申请人很「聪明」、「很热心」、「很有潜力」、「很有分析能力」云云，相关的例证却付之厥如;接著，这封信又未能指出这个申请者这些特质与将来的研究领域有何相关，只说在这个申请人的帮助下，他可以专心在研究工作上，言下之意似乎就是告诉对方这个申请者是一个很好的秘书，而非一个有前景的研究生。
其实，只要多用一点心思，换个观察角度，单纯、琐碎的助理工作一样也可以表现出这名申请者在与研究所有关方面的能力。比方说，推荐人不妨强调他之所以雇用这个人为研究助理，是因为这个助理以前曾做过与他目前的研究领域相关的怎样的报告，表现出申请者在这个研究领域已具备的基础知识或是研究潜力。又以资料搜集的工作为例，可以强调这个这个申请者如何善用某些方法，将资料作有系统的分析整理等。
推荐信样例（管理）
Dear Sir/Madam:
In the capacity of the former dean of "Kellogg Management School" of North- western University (NWU), I am writing with pleasure to recommend Mr. Caleb to your esteemed university.
I got to know him personally when he was taking the course--Methodology of Management Research (or Methods of Management as stated in his transcripts), a course I taught, concerning basic research methods, especially quantitative approach to management research. Then he took one of my other courses--Advanced Strategic Management. Mr. Caleb showed great aptitude on both courses and he got 78 on both, which seem a bit lower, but if you take the difficulty of the test papers and my strict grading into account, you will understand why such scores are still among the top five. Undoubtedly, he got excellent scores on other courses and ranked among the top 5% of his class after the first year of graduate study.
To my knowledge, Mr. Caleb is not only strong in academics, but also in sports and social activities. He was the captain of the soccer team of graduateschool of NWU and led the team to play in the soccer league of our university for two successive years. He was also one of the main founders of the first academic club--"Management Forum" of the "Kellogg Management School" of NWU.
After I left NWU, he still keeps in touch with me from time to time and I am pleased to see that he proved his outstanding capability in both research and teaching position. Therefore I feel very delighted when he told me he would like to pursue his advanced studies in your honored program. I am confident that Mr. Caleb will contribute greatly to your program as well as he did in the NWU. Please don't hesitate to contact me if you need more information.
Truly, yours
XXX
