学员liyf906：Dear Madam or sir， pls be kindly comments my homework. I presented it wrong to lesson 3 jsut now， pls forget that one and comments on this. Sorry for the confusion. lili The illustration shows consumer goods price development in 3 European countries over the past 25 years. The price in Germany， the lowest among 3， presents a general downward trend starting at 5% in 1971 and fluctuates over the next 16 years ， reaching the trough 0% at the beginning of 1986. Predically enough， the percentage goes up gradually within the next 9 years around 2%， which still below its starting points Comparing with UK， we see a level off in France， standing at 4% and with its highest point in 1984 at only 12% and no sharp movement has taken place in the rest of the year. Contrary to France， UK， the highest of the 3， has seen a dramatic fluctuation， starting at 20%， jumping even up to 25% in 1996 and collapsed to German starting level in 1985 at only 5%. While people is happy with the situation， there was a strong recovery in 1988 to 14%. Out of expectation， the price declined again to bottom out in 1994 at only 3% and climb up steadily after.
老师回复:The illustration shows consumer goods price development in 3 European countries over the past 25 years. The price in Germany， the lowest among THE 3 COUNTRIES， presents a general downward trend starting at 5% in 1971 and fluctuates over the next 16 years ， reaching the trough 0% at the beginning of 1986. Predically enough， the percentage goes up (2% )within the next 9 years ， which still below its starting points Comparing with THE UK， France SHOWED LITTLE CHANGE， standing at 4% and with its highest point in 1984 at only 12% and THERE ARE NO sharp movement in the rest of the year. Contrary to France， THE UK， the highest of the 3， has seen a dramatic fluctuation， starting at 20%， jumping even up to 25% in 1996 and collapsed to German starting level in 1985 at only 5%. While people is happy with the situation， there was a strong recovery in 1988 to 14%. Out of expectation， the price declined again to bottom out in 1994 at only 3% and climb up steadily after.
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